Howdy guys, I've just learn how to make narrative text. Then..I start practice by making this short story. I believe it is not interesting story anymore, moreover there's so many grammatical error, but I hope that people will enjoy it. Even if not, at least I can get such kind of appreciation since I know how hard my struggle to make it, hehe..
#I don't know yet about the title anyway :D
#I don't know yet about the title anyway :D
Early
morning, a young girl woke up from her tight sleep. She was really enjoy her
night camp with her high school friends. Yeah, Tari, the name of the young girl
is have a camping in a small village. She was really excited to wait this
moment since he is such a uptown girl who lives in elite area. It means, she
even never feel how people lives in out of her space. Nevertheless, even if she
was overprotected by her parent, she is unlike the other rich girl who tend to
act spoil, arrogant, and hedonist although actually her parent are such kind of
those type. Her parents protect her a lot, they really care with whom does
their daughter play with, considering someone’s background, and other action
which most rich people are suppose to do. That is why it was no wonder Tari got
a problem in making friendship because her parent really interfere on that.
However, she has a close friend that she really trust in. Unfortunately, they
were apart since they graduate in elementary school. Tari didn’t know where she
is now, her parent didn’t allow her to meet her beloved friend at that time.
After that, she even never heard information about her friend.
In this small village where she camp
has a very beautiful scenery and fresh air. Tari didn’t want to spend her time
without enjoying this atmosphere. Then, she decided to take a walk for a
moment. She was alone because some of her friends haven’t awaken yet. When she
walked for a miles, she saw there was a young girl bringing a big tray while
yelling
“Mendoan, mendoan...would you like
some mendoan ma’am? Don’t you want to try some sir?” the young girl offered her
food which made from tempe which is
already seasoning with flavor and well fried. From her physical appearance,
the girl definitely from the poor background family. Her cloth was so old
fashion, the skin was not treat well, perfectly bad looking. Tari was so
impressed showing that young girl.
“what the hell? Is there anyone who
sincerely get up in this early morning in favor of getting some money? This is
crazy. What a pity girl” she thought.
By
the chance, Tari was hungry anyway after she walked for a miles. Then, she
decided to buy some. She started to approach the girl.
“Excuse me, can I have some please”
she said.
The
girl was so delighted “Sure, it’s still warm” she replied obviously.
“ Wow...it’s really delicious”
“Really? I made it by myself, so
glad that you like it”
“Yeah, I like it a lot” Tari just
smile.
“By the way, where are you from? it
seems like you’re new comer here”
“No, I’m not. I’m just students of
Senior high school, my school having a camp here”
“Oh..I see” the girl nodded.
While
having a small conversation, Tari felt there was something weird with this
girl. As long as they talked, she feel that this girl keep staring at her.
Suddenly, the girl started to talk
“Mmm..do you know? I guess I’ve known
you from somewhere”
“Really?” She didn’t know why she starting
feel uncomfort now. Then she replied again
“I don’t think so, have we ever met
before?”
“Yes we did, it has been long time”
the girl smile. The situation makes Tari more curious.
“I knew you won’t recognize me Tari”
the girl smile. Tari was so surprise. She tried to collect every single pieces
of her memory about the girl in front of her. “Who is she actually? How does
she know my name?” she thought. She really can’t remember it.
“I’m your old friend, Aisyah” the
girl told Tari which make her really shock. Aisyah understood what did Tari
think from her expression.
“It was a long story Tar” she said.
Still, Tari only looking at her old friend without saying anything. She is
speechless. She can’t believe she could meet her old friend since many years
they were apart. And now, after a long time, she found her friend in a worse
condition as like this.
“Did you remember the day we apart
when elementary school graduation?” Aisyah begin the story because she knew
that her friend really want to know what was happened to her. “ A few month
after that, my father passed away. We have to move to this village where my
mother was born in. But, since my mother don’t have any job, I decided stop my
study to help her looking for a job. And as like you see, this is my job right
now, there’s no other job that better than this for the girl who only graduate
from elementary school like me”
It
was really painful for Tari heard the reality. She cried a lot while hugging
her old friend tightly. But, the most painful is, Tari didn’t know one thing.
The truth is that, Aisyah didn’t move because of her father death, but the main
reason is because she asked by Tari’s mother keep away from her as far as possible. Until now, Aisyah actually still
disappointed. But she knew that she shouldn’t blame her friend. And she decided
to keep avoiding Tari even it hurts. In the other hand, Tari didn’t know what
to do. She wanted to help her friend but she can’t do anything right now. Even
if she asking for help to her parents, they won’t help her anymore.
