Freedom Writer

Howdy guys, I've just learn how to make narrative text. Then..I start practice by making this short story. I believe it is not interesting story anymore, moreover there's so many grammatical error, but I hope that people will enjoy it. Even if not, at least I can get such kind of appreciation since I know how hard my struggle to make it, hehe..
#I don't know yet about the title anyway :D

Early morning, a young girl woke up from her tight sleep. She was really enjoy her night camp with her high school friends. Yeah, Tari, the name of the young girl is have a camping in a small village. She was really excited to wait this moment since he is such a uptown girl who lives in elite area. It means, she even never feel how people lives in out of her space. Nevertheless, even if she was overprotected by her parent, she is unlike the other rich girl who tend to act spoil, arrogant, and hedonist although actually her parent are such kind of those type. Her parents protect her a lot, they really care with whom does their daughter play with, considering someone’s background, and other action which most rich people are suppose to do. That is why it was no wonder Tari got a problem in making friendship because her parent really interfere on that. However, she has a close friend that she really trust in. Unfortunately, they were apart since they graduate in elementary school. Tari didn’t know where she is now, her parent didn’t allow her to meet her beloved friend at that time. After that, she even never heard information about her friend.

            In this small village where she camp has a very beautiful scenery and fresh air. Tari didn’t want to spend her time without enjoying this atmosphere. Then, she decided to take a walk for a moment. She was alone because some of her friends haven’t awaken yet. When she walked for a miles, she saw there was a young girl bringing a big tray while yelling

            “Mendoan, mendoan...would you like some mendoan ma’am? Don’t you want to try some sir?” the young girl offered her food which made from tempe which is already seasoning with flavor and well fried. From her physical appearance, the girl definitely from the poor background family. Her cloth was so old fashion, the skin was not treat well, perfectly bad looking. Tari was so impressed showing that young girl.

            “what the hell? Is there anyone who sincerely get up in this early morning in favor of getting some money? This is crazy. What a pity girl” she thought.

By the chance, Tari was hungry anyway after she walked for a miles. Then, she decided to buy some. She started to approach the girl.

            “Excuse me, can I have some please” she said.

The girl was so delighted “Sure, it’s still warm” she replied obviously.

            “ Wow...it’s really delicious”

            “Really? I made it by myself, so glad that you like it”

            “Yeah, I like it a lot” Tari just smile.

            “By the way, where are you from? it seems like you’re new comer here”

            “No, I’m not. I’m just students of Senior high school, my school having a camp here”

            “Oh..I see” the girl nodded.

While having a small conversation, Tari felt there was something weird with this girl. As long as they talked, she feel that this girl keep staring at her. Suddenly, the girl started to talk

            “Mmm..do you know? I guess I’ve known you from somewhere”

            “Really?” She didn’t know why she starting feel uncomfort now. Then she replied again

            “I don’t think so, have we ever met before?”

            “Yes we did, it has been long time” the girl smile. The situation makes Tari more curious.

            “I knew you won’t recognize me Tari” the girl smile. Tari was so surprise. She tried to collect every single pieces of her memory about the girl in front of her. “Who is she actually? How does she know my name?” she thought. She really can’t remember it.

            “I’m your old friend, Aisyah” the girl told Tari which make her really shock. Aisyah understood what did Tari think from her expression.

            “It was a long story Tar” she said. Still, Tari only looking at her old friend without saying anything. She is speechless. She can’t believe she could meet her old friend since many years they were apart. And now, after a long time, she found her friend in a worse condition as like this.

            “Did you remember the day we apart when elementary school graduation?” Aisyah begin the story because she knew that her friend really want to know what was happened to her. “ A few month after that, my father passed away. We have to move to this village where my mother was born in. But, since my mother don’t have any job, I decided stop my study to help her looking for a job. And as like you see, this is my job right now, there’s no other job that better than this for the girl who only graduate from elementary school like me”

It was really painful for Tari heard the reality. She cried a lot while hugging her old friend tightly. But, the most painful is, Tari didn’t know one thing. The truth is that, Aisyah didn’t move because of her father death, but the main reason is because she asked by Tari’s mother keep away from her as far as  possible. Until now, Aisyah actually still disappointed. But she knew that she shouldn’t blame her friend. And she decided to keep avoiding Tari even it hurts. In the other hand, Tari didn’t know what to do. She wanted to help her friend but she can’t do anything right now. Even if she asking for help to her parents, they won’t help her anymore.